Brushed my long lustrious hair for 1000 strokes,
getting ready for a date with the love of my life.
He has something special planned, said it's no joke,
I'd be willing to bet, he wants to take me as wife.
So I primped and I fussed, spent hours on my nails,
needing to look beautiful for the man of my dreams.
Even trimmed my unruly pubes, all the small details,
for this loving man, I'll go to any, all extremes.
Threw my gown in the dryer to get out any wrinkles,
twenty minutes on high ought to do the trick.
I love this gown, the way it makes his eyes twinkle,
my love will be here soon, better get dressed quick.
Pull the gown out of the dryer, throw it over my head,
static electricity!!! My God, I wanna be dead.
Author notes
Love you Tory.
Picture prompt shown here: http://allpoetry.com/contest/2417367
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A contest entry
- Picture Prompt by Nicada.
700 points, ended August 13, 2008, 11 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - The Best of the Best by Desdmona.
1400 points, ended April 1, 22 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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With the picture and the ending, I thought this was a riot! I'm still laughing. The rhyming was good and didn't seemed forced, I love how you took the prompt and the picture. It was good. Good job and good luck! ~Des
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ha ha . . cute take on the prompt . . congrats on the trophy . .
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HA! HA! This was a very funny take on the picture prompt! I would have never guessed this response. Very unique and entertaining. Thanks for entering my contest. Blessings, Patty
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well done here on the prompt
best wishes in the contest
Love you
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