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2ed chances

i cant believe it
it to good to be true

i 'll admit
i did wrong
i ducked up

and yet
you want me back

when i almost drowned
and was a wreck
from i don't know where
you wouldn't let me go

when i bled
and you saw
you just held me
and told me its okay

when i got hurt
by someone i let get
to close to me
you where there for me
just cause you wanted to be

when something was wrong
and i wouldn't spill
you would let me
cry on your shoulder
until i was ready to talk

when you would
hold my hand,
have your hands on my hips,
kiss me,
for some reason i can't explain
it was like time stood still

and now i realize
something that most dont ever get the chance to
actually have someone see you
and love you for it






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  • TwoFacedPsycho
    August 11, 2008
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    Very good, girl! I'm impressed!