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[ The past is the past ]

The past is the past
and we shouldn't look back
step forward into a new you
try to shake away
the last bits of darkness

but you already knew
it was a hopeless cause
when in the darkness for too long
you shy away from the light
the salvation

But as usual
darkness engulfs you
and fills every vein
it captures every last good memory
and every warm feeling

leaving you lost
alone
cold
with the darkness as your only friend.

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  • mrocun
    August 11, 2008
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    I sure know this feeling.
    Very well written and a good description.
    Well done.

    Samuel