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Falling Down


As I realize that today is valentine's day I think of how we use to be

As I fall out of bed realizing all the spiteful things we had said

I never realized how heartbroken this would make me feel

Not knowing you were here

When you malicious left for no apparent reason

I once forgave you with no redemption

When I was falling down







Author notes

"Why does it feel the same to fall in love or break it off? And if young love is just a game, then I must have missed the kick-off..."

-Blink 182, "Going Off To College"

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  • ratkos
    August 11, 2008
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    thispoem is very emotional.Thank you for entering