Forgiven?
Another spacial thought
Full of unsuccessful truth.
A dream that wanders on in death
With a pointless pursuit of life.
A film that clouds the chosen man's health.
A stealthful lie to cover up.
The residing pains of crusifixion
Which brought down the cold stone pillars.
A forgotten failure that lies within
Destroying all bonds of trust.
Another wish that's blown away
On wind swept desert feilds.
A decadent loss of a brilliant love
With hidden jaded feelings.
A reality lost long ago
Crucified on the prophet's back.
Yes you are forgiven.
Author notes
This picture just reminded me of the word crusifixion, so that's what inspired me. It's pretty much the definition of forgiven, but in a bad way. It's about how people say they forgive someone, but still haven't truly forgiven them.
A contest entry
- Dark Pic inspired. by Lord Merlynn.
1000 points, ended September 14, 2008, 13 entries
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