Maybe I wasn't everything to you
No....
I was nothing to you
Just a girl who extended friendship
that must have been mistaken for something else
since it resulted in your hands in places they should've never gone
Way to go, big man
You sucessfully overpowered a fifteen year old girl who stands about, oh, 5'1
I tell you
that's some accomplishment
I figure you'd like a thank you for the mental scars
They go very nicely with the fact that the idea of love repulses me now,
the knowledge that anyone can fall for me
and I'll have to break their heart because some idiot tore me down
What are you expecting me to say?
"Oh sorry. Some guy made me all twisted and bitter but hey,
there are other fish in the sea. I bet they're happy with life and even smile from time to time.
Go get 'em, Tiger!"
Please,
You've done more than enough
so stop trying to call me
I won't answer
and stop asking my friends how I am
They won't tell you anything
Just be satisfied with what you've done
and call it a day
Author notes
*le sigh*
I've been taking other people's advice on the caps thing. I pledge to never start my lines with caps unless it's the beginning of a new sentence.....
maybe.
Or maybe I'll do it every now and again just to piss you all off.
Muahahahahahaha. *insert evil little man twirling his evil little beard here*
Oh, and go easy with the brutal comments please. Be harsh all you want, but can you maybe line your insults and critisms with a little padding? My mental state after writing this isn't all that great.
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This may not be my best but it means the most to me.
Sorry.
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I didn't really realize that what that kid did got to you so much and that that's the reason why you won't get too close to James. But James doesn't seem like that kind of guy to do that, so I don't think that you should worry about that happening too much with him. I really want to meet this kid with a good smack to the face, because he shouldn't have done that.
Anyways,
My favorite part is:
"I figure you'd like a thank you for the mental scars
They go very nicely with the fact that the idea of love repulses me now,
the knowledge that anyone can fall for me
and I'll have to break their heart because some idiot tore me down
What are you expecting me to say?"
You have some pure rock-hard Liz-ness in here. I love it. It's a really good and emotional write.
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