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Devil's Advocate

Hell is found
right there in your arms,
and Baby, I'm running right for the flames.
Don't need me a piece of heaven on earth, so
Set me on fire, to be burned once again...

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  • XxYoru-OkamixX
    August 13, 2008
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    wow that's amazing


  • firefly53633
    August 12, 2008

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    Nice write!

    Thanks for the opportunity to read and respond! Good job showing reckless abandon to one's desires!Quite mysterious! Makes me want to read more! You got more?
    Please return the favor


  • righteousme
    August 11, 2008

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    but why choose hell? why not wait for a heaven ? hmmm.... great write and the title is fitting.... MWAH...


  • transcendental baby gold member
    August 11, 2008
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    Wow, now that sounds like a pretty hot fire


  • xrain dancerx
    August 10, 2008

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    short and sweet yet sexy, dark, and scary. I LOVE IT. lolz. great job! thanx for entering and good luck!
    *hugs* tay.

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