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Affection

Stay a little while,
                    enough to make me smile.
Don't need too much,
                    a simple touch,
A glance to make my day.

Can't stay away...

Linger for a moment,
                  take the hint--

Can't help but laugh...

Wanting to tell
                        to yell the truth

Yearning to keep you close
                                              at most-

Learning to say I love you.

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  • Polaja Greeters member
    August 11, 2008

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    I really like the rhythm of this piece - I think that the presentation is really fitting too The last atanza (not sure if that is the right word ) is fantastic - very emotive! I enjoyed the read very much

    Keep writing

    Polly