"Insignificant Bitch"
Your pet name registers.
"You are a worthless load"
Here we go again.
"I hate you!!"
My voice, so brittle, so angry.
You flinch back...surprised?
Who do you think I am?
Did you think I was your rug?
Do you think that I would allow you to step on me,
Use me for your cruel intentions?
I hate you,
I can't stand your voice!
I cannot stand the way you manipulate my feelings.
I HATE YOU.
Who do you think I am?
Your "Insignificant Bitch?"
Well keep on talking,
We'll see your body on the floor.
I hate you,
Don't you see?
I want you dead.
Then we'll see who's really worthless.
Author notes
Alright...this is about my abusive ex. I am not an angry person, so...I tried. I really did.
A contest entry
- Come on Lovely Poets! Let Your Hatred Come Out With Cruel Passion by Leaving Today.
465 points, ended August 19, 2008, 19 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What do you think? Anything I can work on?
Comments
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Good try! Well done
Thanks for your nice entry. There's a typo....."I want (not wan't) you dead". please correct that, otherwise ok. Good luck in the contest
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