carousels are just god's way of showing you that life never ends
just hells way of proving that you forever spin in circles
& kaleidoscopes are just the pretty colours of life that can never be reached
It’s a shame that parachutes float only so high
because who can reach the stars when you can’t pass the atmosphere.
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- Mistakes and Memories by whiterabbit..
380 points, ended August 28, 2008, 24 entries
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"hells" ---> "hell's"
Sorry haha.
"kaleidoscopes are just the pretty colours of life that can never be reached"
Wow.
The title fits this poem perfectly too =]
Shelly
xxx
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I really like this. It's different and thought provoking. I can't pick a favorite line, they're all so beautiful. Brilliant write doll.
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cool!!
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k
this proves it
you are so way better!!!!!!!!!!!!!
i mean
really?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?
where did this come from
i could never get this out of me!?!?!?!?!!?!?!
"carousels are just god's way of showing you that life never ends"
hahah especially the one at disney land!!!
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Pretty, darn, cool.
I love the opening metaphor, it's so cleverly concocted... But after reading it I feel there's so much that could still be placed into that metaphor. Do you leave it out to lets thoughts roam? Or another reason?
Well anyways. I still think, you deserve,
THE MIGHTY THREE!
Go get em tiger
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ahaa thanks for the comment
i usually write longer stuff so i felt like i couldnt really add more so just let your imagination fly you away into your dreamland
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It’s a shame that parachutes float only so high
because who can reach the stars when you can’t pass the atmosphere.
lovelovelove that
but the period at the end should be a question mark
otherwise it's just confusing. -
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nooo it could be a period or a question mark depending on how you read it
/ i mite be slightly stupid lmfao
ps. thanks lovelovelvoeyouuu <33
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