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Seething Flame, Cool Fingers

I sit with you,
Hearts beating in unison,
Love, true love.
Fire's heat, bodies warmth.

Cool fingers caress the inside
of my soul, The fire cannot hide.

Coming forth in volcanic eruption,
heat blazes, fingers cool,
Love brings hot and cold creation.

Night to day
Hate to love
Hot to Cold
Seething flame, cool fingers.

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  • Virgoan
    August 30, 2008

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    the voice in this piece is young - i like the tone of vulnerability here.

    thanks for sharing your gift.


    HENSLEY


  • Age of Rain
    August 10, 2008

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    I enjoyed the title and the end. An interesting image to be sure. Best of luck in the contest