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Feeling your Teeth

Feeling your teeth on the naked flesh of my neck and shoulders
is a desire that i have rushing through me
making my body quake and quiver gasping in my dreams
knowing what you feel like under my hands
wishing to know what you feel like under my lips

wanting to memorize every inch of your delicious skin
so that no matter what i can make it so you are
the one that gives me pleasure and no one else
you are the sexiest man i know

wishing to feel your soft lips on my most sensitive parts
feeling the area heat up at the thought
biting my lip trying to hold back the desire to
know the mystery that your clothing hides

feeling the throb that wont stop no matter
how much it becomes stroked until your fingers go to work
then making it crave you more by the throb
happening from the time your fingers leave my flesh
till the next time you penetrate me again

feeling as if i am addicted to you
and needing another dose with each day that we are together
knowing i need to focus on other things
but only being able to think about you

Author notes

hey guys I know i havent written one in a while. i have more but this was on hand. i hope to post more soon. lovfromdarknes2lite

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  • Poetryintheblood gold member
    September 13

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    Thank you for your sensually beautiful entry, good luck in my contest, Josie


  • Darc Soul 69
    September 14, 2008

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    lol nice version of Ali porn jk you know i love it. Thanks for sharing this sensual piece with all of us here on AP an cant wait to read more writes from you

  • EdibleRoses
    August 12, 2008

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    This is hot. I love it. it's beautiful and it's sexy without being raunchy and...well, like porn. It's not porn, it's art. Very well done.


  • Lexie
    August 11, 2008

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    i love this poem a lot. very sexy and addictive love making was described in this poem. great job. =) wondeful.