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Two Haiku's

Haiku #1
Majestically free
Beauty of the deep blue sea
No aquarium


Haiku #2
Clouds Abundantly
Running across naked skies
Beautiful to see


Author notes

Prompt: #1 Picture
Form: Haiku - I've never attempted one before so I tried two

Prompt:#2 Anything
FormL Haiku

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  • e m i l y
    August 23, 2008

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    Ah the haiku! It's a great form. It's all about imagery though.
    I always get confused with syllables so it's difficult
    for me to write a good haiku.