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Split stones and wrongful roots.

Craftsmen hawk their wares
on creased corners of corpses' siesta:
memories bent from steel
with a stranger's pair of pliers.

Booksellers blend into background pains,
staining second-hand stories
in pretense's rehearsed parade
as inked-in fluid-forms
storm mind with scribbled deceits

and unrecognizable ruins
reminisce of lifetimes never lived,
blinking fair lashes of pink-rimmed lies.


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4. Borrowed Tombstones.

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  • Viyanna Rosemarie silver member
    August 16, 2008

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    extremely well written from you. congratulations on the bronze trophy that you have earned. i am looking forward to reading more from you in the near future. viyanna rosemarie


  • lilAj
    August 13, 2008

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    yo talent basket buss an a ovaflow


  • penman gold member
    August 11, 2008
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    Wonderful

    Very well done. Best of luck in the contest