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Ebony...

How can love turn worlds upside down?
my heart aches with ebony tears...
love buried deep into a dark, cold necropolis
once lit with bright warmth...gone

Inch by inch I'm sinking deeper entombed;
a dark shadow fills my soul
leaving me in a catatonic and vacuous state;
tenebrious thoughts take over my mind

You've once held my heart in your hand
as I had yours and yet..still you're gone;
I'm left with an ashen spirit of loneliness evermore

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5. Tomorrow is forever a graveyard without you.


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  • penman gold member
    August 11, 2008
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    Wonderful

    Very well done. Best of luck in the contest.