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Not Hot (Etheree)

You
are not
really hot
nor really cool
Just are a old fool
Showed from the very start
that you did not have a heart
It's no wonder you're all alone
Not even called on the telephone
Just king of yourself on an empty throne

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A contest entry

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  • penman gold member
    August 11, 2008
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    Wonderful

    Very well done. Best of luck in the contest