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Teacher’s first day



to a pretty new dress
with butterfly’s stomach

25…  smiling faces



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this malabuku is written for susie; aka azure
her frist day at school

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  • azure85 gold member
    August 12, 2008

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    to a pretty new dress
    with butterfly’s stomach

    25… smiling faces

    Oh, this is so sweet! The first day is so special, just like your haiku, thank you so much!


  • thelordreigns gold member
    August 11, 2008

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    Wonderful 'ku!

    A teacher's first day of a new school year is so full of hope and wonderful - for both the teacher and the student.

    This is just a delight!

    - jo