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Meaty veiws

White currents sailing through
chicken oxo memories
Red currents floating through
beefy bisto deliberation's.
Current buns iced with meaty
stock recollections .
Fruit cakes with rich onion
gravy daydreaming.

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7. Currents in gravy thoughts.

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  • penman gold member
    August 11, 2008
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    wonderful

    Very well done. Best of luck in the contest.