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Take, Take, Take

Drained dry
Can give no more
Living a lie
Cut to the core

All my love I give
With nothing in return
Always the one to forgive
Where is your concern?

Not hoping to change you
Only for you to see
That it takes two
For this union to suceed

So tired of trying
I have no more
There is just no denying
This affair is more of a chore

I love you dearly
But I have come to realize
That this love is clearly
Not going to survive

We don't have much to talk about
I knew it from the start
Thought I could do without
Only listening to my heart

Give, give, give
Take, take, take
I just can not live
Waiting for you to awake

I have to open my eyes
Not listen to my heart
Say my goodbyes
So that we can depart










When is a giving person giving too much?

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  • zombie
    September 30, 2008
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    very good.
    2nd stanza..my favorite.