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The Player Loses

all eyes on you
as you strutt your stuff
but even that
isn't quite enough
love 'em then leave 'em
just 'cause you can
as you go break another one
you heartless man
and when it's all done and you're through
you'll be left with only you
then tell me whatcha gonna do?

Author notes

1. Big is the size of your ego, tiny the size of your heart.

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  • Dragonheart1 gold member
    August 13, 2008

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    I love the last line..Whaatcha gonna do..I agree the player lives a lonely life for feelings are more imortant than the size of his ego!

    return the favor?


  • penman gold member
    August 11, 2008
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    Wonderful

    Very well done. Best of luck in the contest.


  • righteousme
    August 11, 2008

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    he will crawl back to you... the only woman strong enough to stand her grown and say NO!!!!... and if you say yes... i will love ya anyways... great write even with the rhyme....