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Chambers of Time


Huge bodies of rock and fire,
hurdle through space on trajectory,
some are noted with the naked eye,
for it has been written in history.

Each loop of it’s path,
brings it closer to that day,
when the Earth shall be covered in dust,
and nothing can live that way.

Time plays in chambers,
the outcome is quite clear,
the past has proven all of this,
though no one wants to hear.


















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  • penman gold member
    August 11, 2008
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    Wonderful

    Very well done. best of luck in the contest