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Triple Haiku

gold sun drops seawards;
haloing winter almond's
palest pink blossoms

contre jour it's called
back-lit flowers outlined by
light from a bright source

as thoughts crystallise
a poem's lines and verses
form in my mind's eye

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Shenton
Amaranthine Lover

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  • carole21
    October 8, 2008
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    nicely written . . good luck in the contest . .


  • amaranthine lover gold member
    October 8, 2008
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    wow this is beautiful!


  • sheltered
    August 17, 2008
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    Unique imagery. Well done.


  • Mr.
    August 10, 2008
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    • Shenton silver member
      August 10, 2008
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      Thankyou for your generous applause I have corrected the spelling error!

      Best wishes from 'down-under'.

      Shenton

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