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Puzzleing Looks




My dear friend-
I took a break to
take my meds today,

And as I was doing so,
there were several people
walking by here,

that saw your sunflower-
you could see the questions
on their faces,

"there is a sunflower
under that Oak tree-
who put it there and why?
It's a bit odd that there
would be a sunflower there,
especially with all the ferns there"

But not a one stopped
to ask me if I knew-

If they don't want to ask,
then they will never know
about you-
laying here,
and myself being
the only one that
stops by-

I guess it's true-
what they say,

people are afraid to
question what they
fear the answers too-

Maybe when this book
comes out, and they
read it, they will
understand, it is
just my way of
remembering you-

Enjoy, my friend

Ich liebe dich-

Author notes

Number 55 in The Journal Under The Old Oak


Oh some of the looks that people had as they spotted that sunflower under the old oak! It was priceless!

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  • imperfectperfection
    September 16, 2008

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    Brilliant

    Very nicely penned journal entry... I got to read your entire journal, it seems, can't get enough of it ... Thanks for sharing your inner thoughts... take care Love Minoo


  • penman gold member
    August 22, 2008
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    excellent

    My goodness, this is so amazing. You out do yourself with these.


  • Jade.Butterfly gold member
    August 16, 2008

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    Nice peice you have here.
    Kept me in suspence as to wanting to know
    why was the sunflower actually there.
    Wonderfully done my friend.

    -Mandi


    • StarEyes
      August 16, 2008
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      Well, there is 55 in this book on here, and it seems you are reading them backwards Glad you liked it


  • Desire gold member
    August 10, 2008

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    Wow!!

    Already number 55
    Oy!!!!
    Unbelievable
    I so Love Sunflowers too
    You are jamming on these writes Beautiful
    Love it!!
    Keep that quill dancing Precious
    Thank You for sharing Your Heart and Spirit~
    Many blessings to You in all You do Sweet Soul
    Best wishes too
    and much love & light~ Desire~*~


  • Lil-Bit Crazy
    August 10, 2008

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    very strange place....... hmmm interesting write here lol..... great one tho... kept me inrested.. soooooooo why is it that there is a sunflower... i didnt want to be chicken to ask..... hugs


    • StarEyes
      August 10, 2008
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      Need to read number 54, Your Sunflower, that tells you... I put it there.

      • Lil-Bit Crazy
        August 10, 2008
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        heheh i know i just didnt want to look like i was scared to ask as in your poem it says that... never mind i was just kidding around... anyway great write....


        • StarEyes
          August 10, 2008
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          Thanks for not being afraid like all those people were today... That just really amazed me.....


  • Amera gold member
    August 10, 2008

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    That is a strange place for a sunflower to grow. Perhaps it was just a miracle placed there for you and others to notice.

    Love,
    Amera♥

    • StarEyes
      August 10, 2008
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      Yes, I placed that sunflower there today I wanted to leave something there, while I was working...

      Thanks for the wonderful comment..

      and love

      Nyetta

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