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Mystress Tina's Terror Wheel

Good evening and
welcome to the wonderfully wicked
world of Mystress Tina’s pleasures and pains
where most often times you will find me restrained by
handcuffs and chains locked inside her dungeon where her
love reigns. I knew this evening when she gave me that sexy wink
it was going to be a night of unadulterated kink, one in which she was
going to take me right to the brink. This evening was going to be quite a
beautiful ordeal as she began to strap me to her terror wheel, tonight she’s
planning on making me squeal. As she fastened the last strap around my wrist
I couldn’t move I was just barely able to twist and I’m not even going to mention
what she was wanting to do with her fist. I was becoming intoxicated as I drank in
her sweet scent knowing that tonight she was completely hell bent on providing me
with such sensual torment. These beautifully sinful nights that we spend together as
both our hearts and love are bound by black leather tied to one another’s soul with
a satin tether. From the wall that contains all of her glorious implements of torture
she grabbed a gorgeous leather lash, behind her stunning eyes I saw that devilish
flash and I knew right then and there it was my ass that she was going to thrash.
The beautiful pain from her flogger’s tail filled with her love made me melt, my
flesh tingling from the exquisite sensations that I felt as once again her lash
lands with elegant force as my bare skin turns fiery red and begins to welt.
Against her darkened dungeon walls my screams and whimpers echo,
caressing the walls of her heart as they flow, with each and every
loving smack that she lands the heights of our passions grow.
Every mark on my flesh simply a symbol of her love and
desire, my pleasure filled screams and moans she
orchestrates into a harmonic choir and her
love is all that I require for ecstasy,
I love you Mystress T. 

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  • faderman1959
    February 18
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    This was amazing! I pleasure to read and wonderfully formed! Great write!


  • Karl Weiss - Topaz gold member
    August 12, 2008
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    A lovely piece, a work of art. Thank you for your fine entry in this contest


  • Pure Thought silver member
    August 12, 2008
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    Most excellent

    in form, shape, heat and restraint.

  • Lisa Haslett
    August 12, 2008

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    Excellent Poem

    This is a really interseting poem,i like the words and rhythm and rhyme.Good colors too. i could feel every word.Very emotional,and deep.has a good back ground too.Keep up the writing!Lisa K haslett Raytown missouri!


  • Grimoire
    August 12, 2008

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    Ahhh... yessssss!!! I too love thy Mystress. Thanx for not writing another hallmark card. I condone the putrification of civilized norms, and embrace the message of your poem.

    until immolation,
    Grimoire


  • Riftkin gold member
    August 11, 2008

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    This is a beautiful form. I loved the internal rhyme you did with this.. the rhythmn of your words pours like silken flowers on a wedding night's bed.

    Best of luck to you with this one...


    Joann


  • Uniquely-Scarred
    August 11, 2008

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    fuck!!!! this is great love it, love the use of internal rhymn and i really like the lay out this is a stompper


  • Wolf Mancini
    August 11, 2008
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    Whoe...

    I actually got a boner...


  • reeseXtheXsoldier
    August 11, 2008

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    this scares me...

    in a good way. I'm not for the dominitrix thing... but this is a good piece! I am astonished by your useof words and the imagery! Tuche! the last three line really broing it!

    bravo and happy writing!

    The Famous Reese Bailey


  • Lotus-Mama
    August 11, 2008
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    Nice! Love the form! Great job here!!!






  • Desire gold member
    August 10, 2008

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    Oh My Word~


    Now when I opened this- my jaw dropped and I just had to smile with the creativity also rhyme!
    Beautifully done my Friend and Love the shaped verse
    Yep!!
    Terror Wheel-
    Oy!! Excellent~
    that border just grabs
    Thank You for sharing Your Talent and Spirit~
    Many blessings to You in the contest Sweet Soul
    Best wishes too
    and much love & light~ Desire~*~


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    August 10, 2008

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    Well now, not only is that a pleasureable ride indeed, it looks fantastic on the page!!! Brilliantly done! Subtle imagery that provides stark images of erotica!! Woot!!


  • Swtpoetryman
    August 10, 2008

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    This sounds like THE WHEEL OF ECSTASY to a naughty boy like me! HE! HE!

    MYSTRESS TINA sounds like a very fine MYSTESS, INDEED! Thanks SO MUCH for featuring this kinky piece for otherwise this naughty pet may have missed reading it today. Can more than one play in MYSTRESS TINAS' DUNGEON, fellow pet - and will two slaves maker her doubly wet?
    Peace & Love!
    Earl.

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