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Your Sunflower




Mein freund-
I told you I'd be
back today-

We're gonna get those
pictures I told you about-

I also brought a flower for you,
it's not much, just a sunflower-

just a little something,
to say 'someone was here'
to everyone that stops by-

I'm looking out over the water-
an it looks like it's gonna
start raining any minute-

we have gotten so much rain lately-
it seems like that is all it does-
is rain, rain and more rain-

Maybe this sunflower will
last a while- I would like
to think so,
but I don't know.

Well the sun is coming out
again, so maybe we won't
get the rain after all.

There are some kids playing
on the beach across the lake
today, I hope the rain holds
off for them.

I guess, I had better
get back to work now,
my friend.

Enjoy your sunflower.

Ek is lief vir jou altyd
mein freund...


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Number 54 in The Journal Under The Old Oak

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  • imperfectperfection
    September 16, 2008

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    Beautiful Entry

    Beautiful piece you've penned for your journal... the identity you've given to sunflower is a brilliant imagery... very well written poem... take care Minoo


  • Jade.Butterfly gold member
    August 16, 2008

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    AMAZING!

    Maybe i should have read this one first.
    I love the reason you gave the sunflower.
    Just a beautiful piece you have penned here.

    -Mandi


  • penman gold member
    August 15, 2008
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    Excellent

    Oh my you do such a beautiful job with these. Such a great creation. thank you for sharing.


  • Walking shadow
    August 11, 2008
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    Another smash hit

    You keep belting home run balls how do you do it? You are so talented my gosh. Great job.


  • Desire gold member
    August 10, 2008

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    Beauty~

    Oh My this is another Beauty and silly me read the other first before this one
    Duh~
    but You delivered a Gem!
    Keep that quill dancing~

    Thank You for sharing Your Heart and Spirit~
    Many blessings to You in all You do Sweet Soul
    Best wishes too
    and much love & light~ Desire~*~


  • Amera gold member
    August 10, 2008

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    After reading the Oak Tree poem #55, I know where the sunflowre came from. It came from love and friendship.

    Love,
    Amera♥


  • Carolina Moon gold member
    August 10, 2008

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    Very sweet picture you have penned again. Good work!
    Nice touch with the sunflower.


    • StarEyes
      August 10, 2008
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      Thanks Sis,

      I did put a sunflower under that Oak tree today and there is one more on it, that is not posted yet, hehe. Will post it in a minute.....


  • Candy6
    August 10, 2008
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    Nice write

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