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A Perfected Hell

Five AM and the world is asleep
But sleep is for those who aren't
In pursuit of beautiful perfection

I will be perfect
Perfectly skinny
Perfectly beautiful
Lips and belly untainted
By anything except water and air

As a dying butterfly beats in my chest
As the room sways and spins and pulsates
As the bitter cold tears through to my bones
I pull myself out of the softness of sleep
And drag myself onto the bathroom's scale

Seventy two
Two pounds closer
to perfection

A cold sweat breaks out
when I step off the scale
My stomach feels like
It's slowly dissolving
In a vat of pure acid

Somewhere along the line
In search of my perfection
I've fallen into a nightmarish
living hell of an existence

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  • Mistress Masquerade
    August 10, 2008

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    great and super unique take on the lyrics, I had to go back and check to be sure which one this was about. I am impressed. thank you for entering.