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Disinigrated Beauty

Passion cascades in multicoloured hues,

As silent beauty is crumbling with love.

 

 

Lavendar butterflies are nurtured by natures breast,

And contours the sky like fragile fingers.

 

 

Artist's palette of simplicity is painted with tender care,

Revealing a portrait that embraces the naked universe beyond.

 

 

Fluttering like pure angelic harmonies

Vanishing into the amber horizon,

Love assembles into mother natures womb and

 

 

 

Disinigrates like sand.

 

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Contest for Bella-Babie


65 words.

Option 2) Nature

 

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  • whiterabbit.
    September 19, 2008

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    This is so beautifully written. I love it. The way you write just flows so flawlessly. The details and descriptions that you used are breathtaking and the imagery is gorgeous. Wonderful write doll.
    x


  • Craig The Dreamer
    September 7, 2008

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    This is a short poem but puts me to shame that's for sure You definitely have a way with words and gives us such a vivid image of the picture you're trying to paint for us. Great job!


  • MelodiousDreaming
    August 28, 2008

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    Very beautiful, you've an immense amount of talent and at such a young age!? Keep writing, you have a way with words ^_^


  • Truetome
    August 12, 2008
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    this was absolutely beautiful. mystical. keep writing. Love, truetome. ♫♪


  • Yorkshire Rose
    August 11, 2008
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    wow, a very cleverly written poem


  • Yunalonei
    August 10, 2008
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    Nice

    This is a very sweet poem, true to natures beauty.
    Good Luck in the contest


  • perfectsunset gold member
    August 10, 2008
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    Audrey Hepburn's Mom says "much frog applause!!"

    This was a beautiful poem Jax I must say. You really used good poetic devices and brought fresh imagery, colour, & depth. What can I say, talent runs in the family you borrowed it from me can I have it back now?? Lol.. keep up the good stuff.. this was frog-er-iffic! Kudos!

    Best of luck & thanks for entering

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