So many voices..
Crying out, a cacophony of time.
‘‘please don’t move me away’’ is a young lads filled with tears
‘‘why do you pick on and hurt me so?’’ a teenager filled with fear
‘’Please come, please come back’’ A young man as he struggles to live
A scream resounds, a soul is torn
And a voice cries “please, Forgive”
Author notes
This is an older write, as my muse has really been struggling of late.
Comments
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wow a truly amazing write... always nice to learn something new and believe me i've learned a lot from this one. so than you very much...
sorry it took me this long to respond but yet again i enjoyed it
much love
jade


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Very emotional. I do hope your muse returns as I have missed your writings.


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This sounds like me in a way my soul is always screaming for forgiveness in some ways this is a great piece thanks for sharing much love always


