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Voices of time



So many voices..

Crying out, a cacophony of time.

‘‘please don’t move me away’’ is a young lads filled with tears

‘‘why do you pick on and hurt me so?’’ a teenager filled with fear

‘’Please come, please come back’’ A young man as he struggles to live

A scream resounds, a soul is torn

And a voice cries “please, Forgive”

Author notes

This is an older write, as my muse has really been struggling of late.

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  • sykotic
    June 18

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    wow a truly amazing write... always nice to learn something new and believe me i've learned a lot from this one. so than you very much...



    sorry it took me this long to respond but yet again i enjoyed it

    much love

    jade


  • toomysterious
    December 7, 2008
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    Very emotional. I do hope your muse returns as I have missed your writings.

  • Starz of Heaven gold member
    August 10, 2008

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    This sounds like me in a way my soul is always screaming for forgiveness in some ways this is a great piece thanks for sharing much love always