running away from the rest of the day,
running away from you,running from all
the things i must possibly do,i feel
to hurt i feel to weak,walking down a
familiar street.i dont know why you
did this,or how you got the chance
but one thing im gonna let you know
is i might come back again when i feel
like me.
A contest entry
- Anything you want by MrCrepsley.
600 points, ended September 10, 2008, 195 entries
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i wish i can run away
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mmm
i can really feel the pain in this poem,, well written though 
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thanks
i was just writing down how i felt.
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aww this is nice, it's sad but oddly pleasent.
This is a beautiful line:
i feel to hurt i feel to weak,walking down a familiar street.
This is very well written well done
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thank you!
i was writing down my feelings and i had just got back from a walk so that line came to meand yeah.lol
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nice its really nice i like it alot
god bless
love cassie -
i can relate cause when i dont feel like myself i leave
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Preaching to the choir
I know exactly how you feel because I wanna do the same thing. Good one.
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this is pretty good. i think i get what your saying. it do good for the poem for you to separate the lines though
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please tell me what you think!
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