As i lay weeping i see you
Your my light
I've grown because of you
Right when I give up you make me stand again
I lay my head in shame
The need for grows stronger
I lust for you more and more
I don't think you know how much I want you
But I know you will leave me again
I will wait for you
My Love
Author notes
I was the tree. And...that person was the sun yep yep
A contest entry
- Beautiful Picture Prompt; Semi-Quickie by perfectsunset.
475 points, ended August 14, 2008, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Oh wow, great metaphor and you filled this poem with love and beauty. Lovely imagery and the meaning so very deep.
Best of luck & thanks for entering
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After reading your author notes I was able to see what you were describing more clearly..
I don't know what else to say, but good job! I'm sure there are other people out there that share that same situation.
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