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A Night Dream

I closed my eyes
To the darkness of the night
And when i opened them
I was in a different world

In his arms i was
The one i always loved
So close to his chest
So close to his heart beat

He held me tight
And kissed my cheeks
And wispered in my ears
Those words i wanted to hear

My head on his shoulder
Our hands fitting fine
My eyes so amazed
My heart yet comfortable

He kept his hand on my eyes
And closed my eyes slowly
And when i opened them
I was in a different world

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  • Night Terrors
    August 10, 2008

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    Ok some grammar issues here, "I" is a proper noun and should be capitalized no mater were it falls in a sentence. Other than that you have a very good poem here. Thanks for entering.