Cold,
The room is cold and damp,
No openings or windows,
No Sharp object she can use to tear away flesh or even free herself from this cold prison,
Earth,
She sits on the cold earth,
Waiting,
Waiting till he gets the urge,
Waiting till he Touches her again,
Waiting for rape...
Comments
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Solid penning ! A powerful and touching scene !
Very well executed !!
Best wishes ! Friend Easy

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This is a better write. A good imagery given here. A good build-up executed.
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Dark...sAd...amazing, I enjoyed this...continue writing!
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oh my
this is interesting.... enough said.... keep up the good work.


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this is a very frightening write.. like awaiting for the horrid fear she lives..

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