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Untill the urge...

Cold,
The room is cold and damp,
No openings or windows,
No Sharp object she can use to tear away flesh or even free herself from this cold prison,
Earth,
She sits on the cold earth,
Waiting,
Waiting till he gets the urge,
Waiting till he Touches her again,
Waiting for rape...

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  • Ez Writer silver member
    January 21
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    Solid penning ! A powerful and touching scene !
    Very well executed !!
    Best wishes ! Friend Easy


  • Ativyen Volst
    December 24, 2008
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    This is a better write. A good imagery given here. A good build-up executed.


  • Walls-within
    October 16, 2008
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    Dark...sAd...amazing, I enjoyed this...continue writing!


  • Akari
    August 18, 2008
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    oh my

    this is interesting.... enough said.... keep up the good work.

  • GoodbyeAP
    August 10, 2008
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    this is a very frightening write.. like awaiting for the horrid fear she lives..

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