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Not Need. Want.

You are not my everything
But boy, you are something
I do not need you
I want you!

With or without you I'd be happy
With you I'm happier
To my heart, you are not every beat
But baby, you make it beat faster

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  • jt4mc silver member
    August 13, 2008

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    I really like this. Short & to the point. I can really relate!!! I like "but boy" & "but baby". The tone matches the content nicely. Strong, with desires, not desperate or in denial.