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As We Dance

incidents of daily life are a dance

in time, a pirouette in learning,

a waltz of happiness, a procession 

of confusion, or a jig of

sorrow and shame, the steps

of the dance vary daily.


as we dance through our allotted time,

friends are gained, cast away, discarded.

parents influence us then are gone

forever. school shows us multifarious 

lessons that some abide, others discard,

as though forgetting a favorite step.


as we dance we sometimes move with ease, 

other gyrations come with difficulty. dance 

styles change with the times with cultures,

imagine square dancing in Ethiopia or 

doing the Tango In Duluth. grandma’s 

shimmy may never be danced with lust again. 


as we dance, age creeps upon us. 

muscles decay, wrinkles appear, never to go away,

stiffness and rhythm seem to envelop us.

the terpsichore within slowly eludes us.

as in poetry, the dance becomes more important,

just when we need it most. the cycle of the dance floor

is forever crowding us out - as we dance.


Author notes

I feel this poem, contemplating about life, using a metaphor of a dance, succinctly presents my style of poetry, my poetic voice and includes a few hints about the meaning of life! I have found that not taking life too seriously is best! Think of life as a dance -- it may help you through the day!

Thanks to a friend's picture of my late brother water dancing on the water of the Missouri river.

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  • Olivias Violin
    November 19, 2008

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    "I have found that not taking life too seriously is best! Think of life as a dance -- it may help you through the day!" - Thank you


  • CitrineSunrise silver member
    November 12, 2008
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    The dance as metaphor for life was very well developed in this poem. We keep learning new steps, accepting some and discarding others. The third stanza offered some interesting images that spoke volumes about our cultural differences. I look forward to your entry in the next round. Peace, Liz


  • Genesis
    August 20, 2008

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    This was a great write. I love the use of all of the dance terms and styles...it emphasizes your point. Great job.
    --Genesis.


  • z etoile
    August 18, 2008
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    beautiful and congrads on a beautiful piece to all the authors of the poem

  • kimberlee meredith
    August 16, 2008
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    Great poem about life..I enjoyed reading it.  I like that each start with "as we dance".

    "...a pirouette in learning,
    a waltz of happiness, a procession
    of confusion, or a jig of
    sorrow and shame..."

     

    These are great phrases tying dancing and life together!


  • charmander13
    August 13, 2008

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    Hmm.. I think that life just gets harder as we get older.. but nevertheless I enjoyed this refreshing take on the dance of life!


  • heart shaped box
    August 10, 2008
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    I like this one better.
    Very good piece of poetry here.
    thanks for the read.


  • individuality gold member
    August 10, 2008

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    i like that lione with a jig of sorrow or shame - aye we can either go with the madness of the flow or go against it and feel the shame. personally i like to just flow with the easier way i agree too with friends, some come and some go and some we keep forever, that all sepends. i am not sure you putting this in adult category as to me it seems quite mild and soft with feelings rather than overt with sexual. ah age, i am waiting, i said beofre to you, i feel like time sometimes i feel like i am 2 then other times as old as time itself. perspective. thanks - and keep dancing

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