in a recess
rainbows gather
school
A contest entry
- Haiku and Bless You! by azure85.
4500 points, ended August 22, 2008, 57 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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This is lovely.
Congrats on the Bronze.
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in a recess
rainbows gather
school
Oh, this is really cool. Very nice play on words, I like this very much! Thank you so much.
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Thank you. Wow. A thousand points for six words. What a haul. lol
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there it is...the cleverness that licks my mind everytime...beautiful!! the images im getting are so sweet and vibrant...this has its own little theme music playing in my head...love love it
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Great use of the word "recess." The rainbows appearing in a break in the storm and in a break from school.
marlene
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