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the ebb ; not flow
carousel of the soul
spinning and I'm spun

I vomit the Sun
and breathe a
new universe

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  • LeanneBridgewater
    August 10, 2008

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    'know

    my favourite out of evvvveeerrrryyything i've read from you

    i fucking love this

    better than red wine this is
    xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx


  • scenario five
    August 10, 2008

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    simple, but I liked it.
    it was really really great.

    I've been meaning to comment on your works, its just that I seem to forget...I'll make a note to myself to comment more often. :]

    -jenn