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True love # II

Implanted deep, In every living  soul

 A Law, no one ignores

She is the Word,  found in scriptures

The Sunrise, the Sunset

In Moonshine, in a star that falls

Her call, a whisper of Grace and harmony

For deep inside, all creatures know her

A song, a poem

A bond that keeps

The Universe in Order

Just take a look, she shines so bright

Upon the touch, on ones shoulder

In hands holding so tender

Never let go , my love

Upon the smile, of a baby

His mothers eyes, that adore

The proud look, a fathers gaze

Within a word, that soothes a soul

She is in the wind

Falls with the rain

She is in a kiss,

A pretty flower

She is there, in so many faces

Within this life, and beyond

A prayer

To man, and God.

 

 

 

 

 

 

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  • Medouze
    December 13, 2008

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    ha to let you know that those words are sooooooo beautiful

    wish i can say those things bout someone wow


  • Medouze
    December 13, 2008
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    I love this one sooooooo much.....


  • Pixi
    September 16, 2008
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    touching

    well, you described true love in an incredible way... WOW!!!
    it filled my spirit with so much feelings,
    another lovely poem of yours.this is my favourite part:

    A song, a poem
    A bond that keeps
    The Universe in Order

    sherry


  • Moonlightdragon gold member
    September 13, 2008

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    once again your words touch my heart

    this poem is worth more than gold or sliver plate it is a precious jewel for the soul

    Blessed be

    Robert


  • Jalalbad gold member
    August 10, 2008
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    I also love the poem, good luck in contest nick


  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    August 10, 2008

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    Ah..you are revealing the truth through your true images.. I love it ..well done ...my thanks for sharing such a wonderful poem and entering my contest....


  • Puppydog gold member
    August 10, 2008
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    VERY WELL EXPRESSED!!!!!!

    Love indeed is all of these things and oh so much more!


  • AnanCat
    August 10, 2008
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    Very nice and actually it was really spiritual
    Good luck in the contest!
    Anan.

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