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Storyteller

 
The wind weaves this tapestry of texture and color
tall grasses that bend with the weight of their growth
until the wind stirs them to whisper again
a symphony of rustling, small voices singing
telling the secrets of the earth
and only those who listen can see this tapestry
comprehend that these grasses have fallen in pattern
there is nothing random about these twining stalks
the dancing reeds and cattails find their meaning
as fingers of breezes bind them together
arranging the story for those who will read it
finding the careful rhyme and rhythm
of nature's poetry
 
 

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  • RikkiRae
    December 10, 2008

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    Nature so much more than a pretty scenic view, for if you listen carefully and look for the minute detail you can see natures dances. Their beauty is limited only by your imagination.
    You have written a beautiful and stirring poem of the intercracies of nature.

  • scoff
    December 7, 2008

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    To hear the song of the wind,

    one must listen with one's heart.

    That's exactly how I see it, and once you've heard the song, there is no forgetting, or so I believe.

    I hear nature's poetry in this, and it's beautiful.

    Well Done.


  • Swangrnv gold member
    November 2, 2008

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    bravo!

    beautiful piece of poetry, i'm so sorry it took me awhile to get to your page, i apologize..but i'm glad i found this wonderful piece waiting for me!!


  • Freed by Mercy silver member
    August 10, 2008
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    Wow! Great poem! Nature's tapestry. This conjures up real pictures, a video even!