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relationships

i don't want to be the one to nag
to make you feel i hold your strings
one tug one yank and i win
that's not the way i feel

i don't want you to change just for me
but because its also for you
i know i have to change as well
there's no finger pointing blame

lets compromise and communicate

only then can love survive 

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  • KayJay
    August 11, 2008
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    A creative and different take... nicely phrased and full of loving emotions... very well done!
    Ken