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Touches

My words or voice are never tender and subtle enough

To give you this what I wish to give you, my love

I just love your touches so much

That I will dream today, tonight

How it could be sweet to lie beside you still

And to feel all this what you give

Just when you are near

Please tell me what you think

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  • Ah..you are universal love poet and very much eager to bring the bliss of the togetherness around the work you create..time and again..


  • individuality gold member
    March 14
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    thanks anna, i am getting there with the new puter lol it has been a long morning


  • individuality gold member
    March 13
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    ar, not been here as i lost my connection, but i am back now

  • NomDePlume silver member
    February 24

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    To be held

    As love pulls you close
    To be close
    As your lover holds your heart
    To be touched
    As your dream lives

    Your words inspire and thrill the poetic...


  • theheart
    November 2, 2008
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    lovely poem a lovely rhyme. I loved this flow of rhyme..

  • scoff
    August 22, 2008

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    It's hard to find the right words,

    but this poem says it beautifully.

    "How it could be sweet to lie beside you still"

    It's plain truth. Just to feel your love close is one of life's great pleasures.

  • individuality gold member
    August 10, 2008

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    a good piece of poetry, ah to live is to dream, we can not live without them for they dive into us all the time, awake and asleep.

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