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Growth

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I'm left staring at the sky
the broken branches stretch above
attaining heights I never dared to climb
the towering majesty holds my breath
a fear that catches in my chest

As this becomes all I know
composing the world in my vision
the life that grows above me
and, strangely, the rough grey bark
draws my eyes more than the sunlight
the cracks and joins much more
than just a cedar tree

Perhaps I was right to lie here, dreaming
the world beyond lost in a jumble of leaves
as I slowly come to understand myself
in the secrets this old cedar whispers
The leaves that fall in autumn are not lost
the buds that blossom early are not wasted
sacrifices are a vital part of growth
for without the soil below, how could we grow taller?
standing on the shoulders of those who came before

those who dared to reach for the sky 

Author notes

Beautiful picture is credit of james119
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  • Kay88
    December 9, 2008
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    wow

    very nice


  • penman gold member
    December 7, 2008
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    Excellent

    Very creative and so well done. Congratulations on the gold.


  • james119
    August 11, 2008

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    such a pensive work...
    I thoroughly enjoyed reading it
    the last stanza has a lot of punch
    thanks for entering

  • BellaD
    August 10, 2008

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    I love your final stanza and I really think it could stand alone as a great poem! Well done and best of luck in the contest.