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Smile To Click

Snow flakes form honey, as beauty transpires.
Couldn’t sleep, arousal embrace conspires
Clings to thee in dribbles, sway and moves.
Leave the tussles alone, thy touch stirs me.  

Can this world dry the flowing fountains within?
Loose a heart: make it my day, the bravura win.

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  • Night Terrors
    August 11, 2008
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    very cool poem I enjoyed reading it


  • Uniquely-Scarred
    August 10, 2008

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    lovely word choice, it was a hard picture to write about but you did a great job best of luck in the contest


  • February Moon gold member
    August 10, 2008
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    I really enjoyed this. Beautifully written. Good luck.