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Soaked

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The window is wide open

and the rain sneaks in

behind the curtains

to laugh at me

but it’s such a soothing cackle

that I hate to chase it away

 

I just wish it would respect

the nature of wet

and leave the poor pane alone

to dry in the sun

 

 

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  • righteousme
    August 11, 2008
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    once again, speechless and in awe...


  • BehindTheShadow
    August 10, 2008
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    The rain is very healing to me, and this poem made me feel a bit better today, thanks!


  • apples fell
    August 10, 2008

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    "I just wish it would respect
    the meaning of wet" - A great line.
    It's been super warm here, with very little rain
    and when we do get rain, it doesn't last long
    enough to do shit...LOL. Rain really is
    beautiful though. I love the sound it makes
    and it helps me sleep sometimes just to hear
    the drops hitting the roof. A reflective piece.
    One built on the idea of time itself.

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