Alone again to my thoughts
Wondering who you really are
Or even who you think you are
Walking without a flaw
Chin held high to the air
God I want to break it
Something you really should know
Sitting in my room pondering
Candles illuminating in eyes
Malicious intent burning me
Tapping on my chin intently
Imagining your face
God I want to break it
Still I want you to see
Everything you've ever done
And put it back on you ten fold
God I fucking hate you
Even your voice makes me puke
The most vilest of hatred
Sitting quietly I'm waiting
It's just a big game of chess
That you can't seem to figure out
Every stupid thing you say I die
More and more I want to break you
One jaw at a time
Maybe a knee or two as well
Run run run
Everywhere you go I'm waiting
Run run run
Everywhere you hide I am there
Run run run
You can never escape me now
Run run run
Keep running until I fucking break it
Author notes
Just an old friend that uses everyone.
A contest entry
- Come on Lovely Poets! Let Your Hatred Come Out With Cruel Passion by Leaving Today.
465 points, ended August 19, 2008, 19 entries
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Comments
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Damn. I could really see the emotion pop out in this poem. I actually compared it someone I know. It's a really raw poem and I liked it! Great write.
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Wow! Remind me never to get on your bad side. I like the poem...very dark and pretty scary. Written for the contest or with someone in mind? I like the repetition of the "Break it" line, and the "run Run run" line. kind of gives it a evil, hopeless I'll get you no matter how hard to try kind of feel, you know?
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Thanks for your entry
I enjoyed reading it. Good luck!
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