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raindrops fall

~*~
raindrops fall
on orange day lilies -
buddhist monks
~*~

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Haiku #1

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  • myron silver member
    February 11, 2009
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    exellent

    another excellent haiku! wonderful in all kinds of different ways, from the well-crafted techniques used to the vivid images and the surprising juxtaposition.

    Nice to see you post this haiku here. Do I rememeber this haiku from the haiku class?

    best wishes,
    myron


  • Swan song gold member
    August 16, 2008
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    Very good