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Sunlight

Sunlight trickling in
sending me to sleep
As I listen to you
play a song
that has no words
A smile on my lips,
betrays my happiness.






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  • Restless and True
    August 14, 2008

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    awh.

    sounds like a perfect lazy sunday morning.

    I loved this.

    "A smile on my lips,
    betrays my happiness."

    Amazing.


  • just mercedes gold member
    August 10, 2008
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    I like the repeated sibilant 's's here, a truly sleepy sound, ending in happiness. very nice.