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My Lover: The Red Spots

My red dots
Love me
Embrace me
Caress the skin

They fuck me
Like no other
Turn me into
Ten million

Different types of
Orgasm
They nurture my
Dilapidated babies

And console me
With the lights off
Whether it be morning,
Noon or isolating night

They turn me into
A street beggar
And throw me change
Spare scraps

From their bruised
Pockets
They are fortune bound
And I am fortunate

For having them
For they love me
They smell like prickly
Vines

And feel like cotton wool
On my thankful flesh
I am comfortable with them
And they reciprocate unconditionally.

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  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    August 10, 2008

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    Yes..when you speak truth it is very hard to express in the words..but it the poetry which take load of our sentiments with its beautiful expression..and you did that..


    • Anthony-
      August 10, 2008
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      Thank you for your comment my friend. This is stark.