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cardiotoxic

even now, in the stale
laughter of a strobe light,
tech/trance blaring, robe
slipping off to one side—
boys falling off the bed—
your fingers as they cut
the cocaine, so delicate,
so sure

the wisp of smoke
wherein the goddess walks

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  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    August 10, 2008

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    Indeed an intriguing gesture of ther words are crafted here with a wonderful thouaght...thanks for sharing it with me...