Old Humpty Dumpty and his cracked shell
harbored an alien, arrived there from Hell.
Aye, a dark being, a traitor so black
he watched all of Goose Land from his high track.
There on the wall above all the others
the alien plotted to steal Goose Land mothers.
He'd mix them with egg yolk and create new living,
horrible creatures with evil for giving.
Poor Humpty Dumpty had been dead for one year
with a creature inside who only drank beer.
One terrible day in the winter's cold breeze
the alien shivered and shook and then sneezed.
Off of the wall he fell with a plop
and all that was left, was absorbed with a mop.
A contest entry
- Wicked Nursery Rhymes - What Really Happened? by Wilted Rose Bush.
500 points, ended August 11, 2008, 16 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - PIF Fractured Fairy Tales by Antipodi.
1200 points, ended February 4, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Smile... all the while...
Comments
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LOL... Poor Humpty is really taking the rap in this contest
Oh well, good over evil and all that rot
Good luck in the contest
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Hmmm sound like scrambled eggs ta me ...seriously good luck in the contest
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i enjoyed reading this i love how everything is explained and worded great poem and wonderfully wrote
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a good piece of poetry which flows along with a smooth rhythm and stylish rhyme that cracks the yoke of existence with a sure hand.
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This is a great piece that left me with a smile goodluck in the contest best wishes and much love always be well
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you are so funny.. humpty was a cannon who fell from a wall and well never mind
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