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I need you...

Mirror Mirror, on the wall
Can you tell me what am I doing wrong?
The walls are closing and the paintings are black
The doors are slamming and I'm holding me back
I cannot take another pain to my heart
I'm kicking and screaming and falling apart
I cannot handle another mistake
Somebody save me I'm going to break!!!

I need you...

I don't need another savior..

I need you..

I know that you are here to save me now....

This frame is frozen, not destroyed with time
Now picture me perfect and follow the rhyme
Know what I'm doing and hope that it's right
I don't want to leave here in darkest of night
I cannot take another pain to my heart
I'm kicking and screaming and falling apart
I cannot handle another mistake
Somebody save me I'm going to break!!!

I need you...

I don't need another savior..

I need you..

I know that you are here to save me now....

Hmm...Thoughts...

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  • simply.suicide
    August 10, 2008
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    I like it alot

    veryy good


  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    August 10, 2008

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    Humm..what an intensity you have here with your words bringing the depth of the love and the depth of your heart..wonderful indeed...